Snow

. Snow gives definitive outline to dark water as it courses to sea

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Laura Spears

Date: 1/6/2010 6:35:00 PM

One carefully crafted line gives a beautiful visual image.

Brian Strand

Date: 12/16/2009 12:22:00 AM

Best wishes with your writing Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments

Abe Lopez

Date: 12/15/2009 6:15:00 PM

snow is the bright border around dark waters ....... great job Sara.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/15/2009 6:14:00 PM

I can see it glistening so by your visual words... thankxxx for sharing... blessings... luv.... Linda-Marie...

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/15/2009 10:39:00 AM

Very pretty picture in this monoku! I can close my eyes and see it perfectly through your words. Thank you so much for your kinds words! ~Juliane

Constance La France

Date: 12/15/2009 9:18:00 AM

very pretty...

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/15/2009 8:24:00 AM

And what a pretty sight it is! You've captured it with your words, Sara! I can see the beautiful contrast- like a black silk ribbon on a white organza dress!! Love it! Peace and love to you, my friend! Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poems! Audrey

Tim Ryerson

Date: 12/15/2009 8:10:00 AM

Beautiful description, Sara...I can see the scene you describe vividly - Tim