Sneaky Bee

Beautiful Jasmine Sweet smells of all it attracts Trimming vine and trashed Bee so sneaky, stung my neck Living residence disturbed By Eve Roper12/06/2014

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Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 12/14/2014 6:32:00 AM

Lovely, beauty and violence, melded into 31 syllables. I am in awe.

Eve Roper
Date: 12/14/2014 8:03:00 AM

Thank you Scott, that sneaky bee didn't have fun on his mine. Blessings and Merry Christmas

Race Benoit

Date: 12/7/2014 9:00:00 AM

Drat!!! And that stings. Yep, however and all that you did disturb and upset the little bee with the big sting. Heh.Heh

Eve Roper
Date: 12/7/2014 9:59:00 AM

Ha, ha, ha.... You are so funny. I did not look at the incident in that manner, but your right. Blessings eve

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/7/2014 6:23:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs

Eve Roper
Date: 12/7/2014 10:10:00 AM

Thank you, so much for your compliment and your visit Ravi. Blessings to you

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 12/7/2014 1:35:00 AM

I love to see the bees buzzing around petals but from a distance! Wonderful tanka, Eve!! Hugs to you, Rhonda

Eve Roper
Date: 12/7/2014 10:13:00 AM

Truely, they don't bother me, but this time I must have grabed it the wrong way and it maded him mad. Thank you, so much for your compliment and your visit Rhonda. Blessings to you

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 12/7/2014 12:04:00 AM

ouch Eve love the smell of jasmine I have a winter one that's yellow and is now in flower, do without the bee though hugs 7

Eve Roper
Date: 12/7/2014 10:16:00 AM

Shadow, these just quit blooming, they release such a wonderful aroma. Thank you, so much for your compliment and your visit. Blessings to you

David Meade

Date: 12/6/2014 5:43:00 PM

Sneaky bee -- I stepped on one earlier this summer -- I thought I stepped on a nail!! Benadryl and ice!! hope you fell better.

Eve Roper
Date: 12/6/2014 6:14:00 PM

David that is the first thing I did. Thank you for stopping by, also a little tea tree. Blessings

Jan Allison

Date: 12/6/2014 5:25:00 PM

Such a bitter sweet write Eve and of course the bee dies in the end - great little tanka:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Eve Roper
Date: 12/6/2014 5:27:00 PM

Sorry, you got Tim's comment. Jan, thank you, it was an ouch... I hope not to see it again. Blessing XOXO

Eve Roper
Date: 12/6/2014 5:25:00 PM

Ouch... it was, Tim, I live in Texas and some are still flying around. This is the first time in 30 years I have been stung, they usually don't bother me. Thanks for stopping by and commenting. Blessings to you

Tim Smith

Date: 12/6/2014 5:01:00 PM

Ouch...they have all disappeared for the winter here....I hate when stung...hugs Tim

Eve Roper
Date: 12/6/2014 5:25:00 PM

Tim, I live in Texas and some are still flying around. This is the first time in 30 years I have been stung, they usually don't bother me. Thanks for stopping by and commenting. Blessings to you