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Snap Shots

Yesterday, the snow fell, laced lazily 
all across the frozen field; grace fell down.
My heart raced, apace in a minor key
troubles fled erased from me, was my frown. 

Seemed semblances filled my life-weary head 
so God's beauty nudged my heart-weary soul;
far off, hills became instilled white purebred 
away from mad machines joy milled bold.

Now, black is white, fresh and new, clean and pure 
it takes a hold of blight and sings ... out;
looks at frowns ignite, giggles light, demure.
As, the day brites sledders scream "Watch out!"

Though winter's gray days we'll recall this sight.
They're our days, our nights, dressed in Winter white. 

Here we dawdle, coats, scarfs and boots in Winter white. 
to freeze as frames of memory, joy's root in Winter white.

Stay with me, dream awhile, we could build an igloo?
Oh, won't you make snow angels, beauts, in Winter white. 

I could put snow down your coat, toss a ball or two
believe  me, " I could, I could catch YOU toots in Winter white!"

In frozen splendor, we will still, "Isn't he so cute!" 
Yesterday  is forever captured now SHOOT! in Winter white.



Sonnet with a Ghazal Chaser ;)
see about the poem
dedicated to Chan [nuff rhyme for you hon?]
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 2/8/2014 12:38:00 PM
Congratulations Debbie. Great entry. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/8/2014 8:07:00 AM
Congratulations to you .....A great winnner..Sara
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Date: 2/7/2014 6:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement. Did you really fall in the snow? You made me want to come up there while it is still snowing...to make an igloo! Or maybe a fort that I could hide behind when you start throwing those snowballs! FUN! Two old (not that old, though) women giggling, laughing, me NOT RUNNING, blasting one another with puffy white...maybe even protected by an army of snowmen! You got me going with this one! Love the imaginings! Big Smiles, Dane
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Date: 2/6/2014 5:11:00 PM
very creative pen Debbie congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 2/6/2014 3:29:00 PM
this is so creatively done, Debs and the way you added the chaser on it. I am not seeing this from the winner list, so I don't know what you placed, but I bet it was high! congratulations.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 2/6/2014 3:41:00 PM
nope Andie it was hm wasted here on the sight as are so many of my better verses
Date: 2/6/2014 2:02:00 PM
Debbie I enjoyed this...a few times..:-) :-) :-) :-) congratulations on the win....
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Date: 2/6/2014 1:06:00 PM
I was so sure this was Dee's poem. What a surprise! I like it a lot, although I was really looking for nostalgia and regret and some angst, based on the words in the Beatle's song. Congratulations.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 2/6/2014 3:46:00 PM
not fair you telling us how to feel about the words Roy & after the fact?
Date: 2/3/2014 5:06:00 PM
Loved it again, just as much as the first time around. lol cheri
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Date: 1/25/2014 8:37:00 PM
Nicely written my friend loved each line and verse, thank you my kindred for your wonderful write here. I have to decline your blog tonight i am to tired and have to get up in the morning at 5. maybe another time ok. cheri
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Date: 1/24/2014 2:43:00 PM
Very nice Debi!Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 1/22/2014 8:01:00 PM
Good poetic combination here.
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Date: 1/21/2014 7:25:00 PM
Great write...with lovely memories of yesterdays...
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Date: 1/21/2014 2:36:00 PM
LOL you know me, Deb! And after all I've been through today (sent you a gmail) it's an appropriate thing to be reading right now! Excellent work as always, my dear. I would expect no less from you <3 ~Chan
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Date: 1/21/2014 10:15:00 AM
Oh, the love in this one... ah, yes... only the mature can accept that yesterday is worthy of faith, regardless of the doubts of today... I will have to come back and read this again. xox Dee
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Date: 1/21/2014 10:12:00 AM
Filling in snap shots is great fun. You do it so well. The cold here in Michigan has continued for weeks. I took in a stray cat last night just in case it might freeze to death. One has already. Love, daver
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Date: 1/21/2014 7:05:00 AM
Oh, it's www.grayssportingjournal.com
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Date: 1/21/2014 7:04:00 AM
Like the way you did this, Debbie.."I believe in yesterday". I wish it would snow here at least once this year.
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Date: 1/20/2014 6:28:00 PM
A panorama of canvases painted to perfection with words of beauty! Good luck! A 7 from me dear Debbie.
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Date: 1/20/2014 5:35:00 PM
A most lovely write!
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Date: 1/20/2014 4:09:00 PM
This is terrific with a flurry of rhyme sublime. Loved the first stanza, and the rest, of course.
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Date: 1/20/2014 7:45:00 AM
Interesting way to go for the contest..Is there still snow on the ground up north?..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..I am still having some health problems but I am old..Sara
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Date: 1/20/2014 5:27:00 AM
Beautiful and magical dear lady..hugs..How are you?
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Date: 1/19/2014 9:55:00 PM
I love it
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Date: 1/19/2014 9:38:00 PM
Beautiful snap shoot of the memories of the past. Nice dedication. Loved always, my friend, bl
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