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Snake Eyes Stay

The snake slowly slithered Away but it's eyes Are still here.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/5/2021 10:06:00 PM
Haha... Are the eyes still here because of the fright of being so close as it slithered? Lol
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Date: 3/4/2021 2:50:00 PM
I really enjoyed your poem. Have a lovely day.
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Date: 3/3/2021 11:57:00 AM
I like snake poems--Emily Dickinson's, D.H Lawrence's and Uwe Stroh's (related to the beer?). I will carry tose yes with me until I cast my skin. Bill Keen
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Date: 1/9/2015 1:52:00 PM
SMH, not even a haiku.. :/ 2/10, would not read again
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Uwe Stroh
Date: 1/13/2015 11:25:00 PM
sorry you feel that way

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