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Snail's Pace

And the city air tastes like a dream
Mirages above sidewalks at 8 am
The freeway kicks and screams like a spoiled child 
But I won't give in to them
It is written on so many faces 
I'm sorry, but I won't be taking their places 
I walk like a snail at a pace where I'm free
While people drive like lunatics 
To go home and watch TV

By Kyle Ezra Kriticos

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  1. Date: 3/9/2013 7:19:00 PM
    I like the pace Kyle, gives a person time to stop and smell the roses and so much more. You've got the right attitude and remind the rest of us in your poetry! :)