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Smooth

She listened to his story As he spoke accented words She couldn't help but follow Others said she was absurd Much smoother than chocolate Honey dripped from his lips A tingle in her bossom He brought fire to her hips When he asked her for money He said it would be okay It would be temporary Just a loan he would repay From out of her pocket book In his hand she placed a check He said "Thank you, my darling." As he kissed her on her neck Up to her room he followed Expertly removed her clothes She writhed upon his body As inside of her he rose All that she had imagined Was experienced that night She was not disappointed With her legs she grasped him tight Exhausted she lay sleeping As he quickly slipped away Heading off to cash her check He had felt he earned his pay In the morning when she rose There was a smile on her face By the time the check had bounced She'd be gone without a trace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/29/2015 7:19:00 AM
Hahaha great story, I loved the twist at the ending. How fun, I'm glad I found this one. You're awesome Richard, I am never disappointed by your writes!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2015 7:32:00 AM
This was a fun one to imagine. Thanks for visiting one of my older writes Cassarah.
Date: 12/13/2013 11:32:00 AM
Like a stick of warm butter!!! Yup. Now, I want butter popcorn...yum! Hell of an ending sir! Reality strikes again...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/5/2014 9:56:00 AM
Belated thanks, somehow I missed this one. I hope all is well with you Dreake.
Date: 12/12/2013 7:03:00 PM
ha! smooth indeed! great poem...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/12/2013 10:39:00 PM
Thanks Ilene.
Date: 12/12/2013 6:53:00 PM
Looks like the smooth was outfoxed by the smoother here Rick, A slick smooth write too. Still catching up. Take care, Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/12/2013 10:40:00 PM
I'm behind as well. Visiting family and friends in Ontario. Still try to come here and satisfy my addiction for soup.
Date: 12/12/2013 5:48:00 PM
Outstanding Richard! Great ending!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/12/2013 10:41:00 PM
Thanks Joseph I had fun writing this one,
Date: 12/12/2013 4:20:00 PM
Ummmmmmmmmmmmm.............yes. I'm speechless.....Smooth, indeed. Please change TOO to TO last line second stanza.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/12/2013 4:25:00 PM
Thanks! I changed.

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