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Smoldering Look

V enus arrives on shore graciously in a shell E asily carried by breadth the sun gods expel N ymphs greet her with a rich purple cloak U ndulating roses their seed heads shook S he covers her modesty with a smoldering look

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Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 11/28/2012 7:59:00 PM

Your acrostic blazes with sensuality....well done! Hugs

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/29/2012 12:28:00 AM

Thank you Cecila for stopping and commenting.....Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/27/2012 1:53:00 PM

that was really an interesting line from which you derived the title of your fine acrostic poem: She covers her modesty with a smoldering look. Love that!

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/27/2012 2:39:00 PM

lol dont know where it came from .......thanks for stopping by....Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/27/2012 6:54:00 AM

Who's a clever girl then, I laugh at subtle, but clever yes. This is lovely xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/27/2012 2:40:00 PM

me isnt.... Thought I would have a go at this form. Wasnt sure if it was ok.. Seren

David Williams

Date: 11/27/2012 3:11:00 AM

Seren excellent acrostic very subltly romantic...David

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/27/2012 6:31:00 AM

wow David me being subtle thats new on my poem scene......... Thanks for stopping by ........Seren