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Smoking a day kills a life away

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Smoking a day kills a life away

Have you no shame
No, fear nor heart,
No one who can tame
Have you no understanding of
How to use your delicate brain

Is it so necessary?
One puff is all one need, to kill a creature
And boom, it becomes a bad deed
Can't you think for once, how it will harm?
The young, the old, it’s like a bad luck charm

How it decreases your super tiny life
The dead would rather wish to be alive
Here you are giving it all away in vain
Ended up plotting your own death
What I ask you, will you ever gain?
Addicted you are and you might forever be
Are those memories so unbearable to see?
You want to forget better find another way
Solution is right in front, so you had better stay
Cigarette is not the problem to your matter
The only thing it will ever do is kill and shatter
Think of those suffering because you are insane
Who cannot breathe … Who are in profound pain?
Who wishes to re-write those days gone
Without any, more further complaint
Lungs collapsed, back cut open
It sounds horror to even be spoken
A life in hospital does not sound great
It might be a joke to you but
Trust me it's never too late

It is not easy not to breathe
To be strong and not grieve
I beg you to listen to me
I do not promise, it to be easy
For your own sake stay
Stand up and fight your way
Life is too small to fight
With trials of diseases that lay
For humanity’s sake stop with this play

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  1. Date: 9/19/2013 2:29:00 PM
    Good message... 'when will they ever see'... Terry

    fati Avatar fancy fati
    Date: 9/20/2013 7:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you..:)