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Smoking

Why do people smoke? Gives them bad breath causes death. Makes you age, makes you wrinkle makes you stink a little. Gives you yellow teeth, makes you unable to breathe. You can't even smoke in a bar anymore they cost a helluva lot even at a grocery store. I used to like to smoke until the cost of them went up and cough so hard in the morning until i threw up. I hate smoking and glad i quit i hate the habit and glad i got rid of it.

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Date: 5/23/2015 8:04:00 AM
Good for you! I wish I could do the same. For me, it provides a false sense of control and momentary relief from daily life. It is a terrible habit and definitely a mind over matter subject. I enjoyed your poem. Nicely written and made me giggle at the stupidity of the matter.
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Date: 5/23/2015 2:55:00 AM
Nice write Michelle..I stopped 35 yrs ago...my greatest achievement!...and thanks for the comment...Peter
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