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Smokey and the Golden Retriever

SMOKEY AND THE GOLDEN RETRIEVER Once when I was just a kid, My mom thought 'twould be nice, If I'd invite some friends to play, And we could swing outside. I had a swing set in the yard, Where I would play for hours. My daddy built it just for me, Away from Mommy's flowers. It stood beneath a large Oak tree, And even had a sand box. We played and swung and had a ball, Got sand in clothes and socks. Our neighbors had a big red dog, A loyal, patient friend, Prince often came to play with us, He wagged his tale and grinned. Another dog came on the scene, And Prince was not amused, They postured and they sniffed each other, A dog fight soon ensued. We screamed and cried and climbed the set, As Prince and dog fought on, Smokey heard our frantic cries, And raced across the lawn. Prince was huge with big white teeth, And muscles big and stocky, But Smokey feared him not and leaped, And rode him like a jockey. Smokey sank his claws in deep, With teeth he grabbed his neck, The big dog took off down the street, With Smokey firmly set, Upon his back, he rode him well, They soon were out of sight, We worried that he might get hurt, In yet another fight; But he came strolling home real soon, The hero of the day. "Don't worry kids', he seemed to say, He won't be back today." Judy Ball For Fraqncine Roberts Pick A Pet Contest - July4,2011

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Date: 7/14/2011 8:42:00 PM
I remember this one and am glad to see it on the winner's list as I go through the winners. Congrats, Judy!
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Judy Ball
Date: 7/15/2011 7:43:00 AM
Thanks so much Andrea. Smokey was a very special kitty and I don't think there will ever be anotherr like him. However, each kitty I have had is special in their own right and has their own place in my heart. Right now we have a grey tiger stipe Tabby named Mishak who is a real bad boy. Always after the canaries. God Bless, JB
Date: 7/14/2011 7:39:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Francine, Judy
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Date: 7/11/2011 3:16:00 PM
great story and well written... kept me on the edge. Congratulations Judy
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Judy Ball
Date: 7/11/2011 3:17:00 PM
Thank you so much Robert. Smokey was my first friend and first pet. Loved him dearly. There are 10 Smokey Tales in all. Hope you will decide to get to know him. He was such fun. God Bless, JB
Date: 7/11/2011 3:05:00 PM
Great story Judy. I'm assuming that Smokey is a cat. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Judy Ball
Date: 7/11/2011 3:16:00 PM
Thank you so much Joyce. Yes Smokey was my first friend and first pet. Glad you liked this. There are 10 Smokey Tales in all. Hope you will decide to get to know him. God Bless, JB
Date: 7/11/2011 3:05:00 PM
Great story Judy. I'm assuming that Smokey is a cat. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Judy Ball
Date: 7/11/2011 3:18:00 PM
Yes indeed. Smokey was a cat and a very smart and funny one too. God Bless and thanks so much. JB
Date: 7/11/2011 2:55:00 PM
Congrats..Sara
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Date: 7/11/2011 11:53:00 AM
From one animal lover to another, congratulations on another great write and win. BobQ
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Judy Ball
Date: 7/11/2011 1:48:00 PM
Oh thank you. I didn't know I'd won. How do I find out about it. God Bless, JB
Date: 7/11/2011 10:54:00 AM
A delightful poem, Judy! Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Judy Ball
Date: 7/11/2011 1:50:00 PM
Thank you so much Carolyn. Didn't even know I had won. How do I find out about it. God Bless, JB
Date: 7/11/2011 10:31:00 AM
enjoyed the whole scene... my special cheers to you for the fine win, judy! :) huggs!
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Judy Ball
Date: 7/11/2011 1:51:00 PM
Thank you so much Nette Have to find out how to find these things out. Didn't even know I had won. This is great. I'm just so pleased. God Bless, JB
Date: 7/11/2011 10:31:00 AM
LOL, good for Smokey! Many congrats on your win, Judy : )
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Date: 7/11/2011 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the pet contest today Judy. Love, Carol
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Judy Ball
Date: 7/11/2011 1:53:00 PM
This is great. Thank you so much. Didn't even know I'd won. Been in bed sick most of the day. Thanks bunches. God Bless, JB
Date: 7/11/2011 8:55:00 AM
Congrats Judy on your super success in the contest with this dynamic delight my friend.. so glad u got it in .. enjoy with luv.. and a blessed day to top it off ..
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Judy Ball
Date: 7/11/2011 1:55:00 PM
Thank you Linda-Marie. Just found out by checking my comments that I'd won. I'm so pleased. Been in bed sick most of te day. This lifts my spirits a lot. God Bless, JB
Date: 7/11/2011 8:50:00 AM
congrats on your 4th place win with this humorous story Judy
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Judy Ball
Date: 7/11/2011 1:56:00 PM
Thank you so much Francine. Been in bed sick mmost of the day and this lifts my spirits a lot. Glad you all liked it. God Bless, JB
Date: 7/4/2011 11:08:00 AM
Gosh, how many smokey tales do you have there, Judy? If smokey had been the dog, we could have called this one "on top of old smokey" heehee. I enjoyed the read. you do great rhyming quatrains.
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Judy Ball
Date: 7/11/2011 1:58:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea. There are 10 Smokey Tales in all. I posted them all. He was quite a kitty and I'd love to make a children's book of his stories. Hugs and God Bless, JB
Date: 7/3/2011 8:11:00 PM
a whale of a tale so touching Judy.. now to enter go to contest page.. go to contest "Pick A Pet" and click on ENTER button.. all your poems will appear..just find this piece by title and click the circle then hit enter at top or bottom of page of poems..sounds harder than it is.. good luck luv with this awesome write..
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Date: 7/3/2011 9:08:00 PM
Thank you so much Linda-Marie. Glad you liked it. I have about 9 "Smokey Tales". He was quite a kitty and I'll never forget him. You picked this one though so it's the one I entered. Thanks bunches. God Bless, JB

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