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Smoke and Shadow

Smoke and Shadow Lady Chasing rainbows In the dark Surround yourself in shallowness Too deep For even Mermaids Such as you... And mix your potions carefully My Lady-of-the-Miles Smoke and Shadow quicksand Waits... With Night Mist Webs Creating stories Night Mist dark A'glistening...

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/23/2012 11:53:00 AM

Wonderful reading your excellent poetry today Elizabeth. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/23/2012 9:57:00 AM

Hi there Elizabeth, back from my hols and digging in to have a read of your lovely work, glad to see you here xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/23/2012 1:58:00 AM

love the imagery here, elizabeth, the second stanza is a gem, shallow deepness wow that is so good...

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 10/22/2012 8:09:00 PM

Awesome. Enjoyed the contrast of images,the formatting, the whole kit and kaboodle. Thanks for sharing this moody write. Smiles from Cyndi

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 10/22/2012 7:14:00 PM

* PS., I REALLY DO DIG THIS LOOKING GLASS OF BEAUTY'S POEM. SWEET KISSES TO YOU, RACHEL *

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 10/22/2012 7:07:00 PM

* I REMEMBER ONE 'EASTER' HEARING THIS WONDERFUL PASSAGE WHEREIN, CHRIST JESUS, JUST BEFORE HE WAS CRUCIFIED TURNED HIS EYES UNTO HEAVEN AMID THE JOY OF THE HOLY SPIRIT AND SAID, 'FATHER, I THANK YOU THAT YOU HAVE REVEALED TRUE WISDOM UNTO BABES AND SUCKLINGS, AND BLINDED THE EYES IN THOSE WHOM THINK THEMSELVES TO BE WISE.' THUS, SWEET BEAUTIFUL ELIZABETH, I DO BELIEVE THAT I DO SEE WHAT YOUR BEAUTY HAS SOOO PROFOUNDLY SPOKEN WITHIN A TORCHFULS WAY. QUITE CREATIVE IN EXCELLENT. MY LOVE, RACHEL *