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Smitten

Trembles shook my entire body when my eyes set up on your face Your exquisite chiseled features had me riveted it in my place Black jeans, white shirt, tan skin emphasized your physical grace Your smile filled my stomach with butterflies as my pulse did a frantic race I felt a blush rising on my cheeks as you purposefully entered into my space A warm hello along with the touch of your hand so bewildered me I had to brace As I wobbled, the course of history changed when you caught me in your embrace ~For Brian Strands contest~ Feb. 14, 2019

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Date: 12/7/2019 9:20:00 AM
Very romantic poem, Lady C! Such spellbinding imagery. Magnifique poetry! Love and more love always.
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Date: 11/2/2019 1:55:00 PM
Beautiful expression Cecilia, I believe the change in history is for the better
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Date: 11/2/2019 1:51:00 PM
Cecilia, what a heart pounding romantic write. You know how to weave the words to make some blush and others to say WOW!!
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Date: 10/30/2019 8:04:00 AM
This one brought the heat. ;0)
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Date: 10/29/2019 5:08:00 PM
Hello Cecilia Macfarlane, now that is romantic. have a nice evening my friend. So nice to meet you.
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Date: 3/5/2019 11:13:00 AM
Wow! How romantic, Cecilia! It must have been love at first sight...and then history was changed! ~ Had not realized you were back posting...a pleasure to be reading your work again. Regards & Hugs // paul
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Date: 2/21/2019 11:30:00 AM
What a romantic poem Cecilia - this sounds like a new romance which is both enticing and exciting, if an old one wow, what a perfect life Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/15/2019 3:49:00 AM
This is so beautiful. It is poetic and has the perfect title. Wow!
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 2/20/2019 5:15:00 PM
Thank you Caren, glad you enjoyed. Hugs
Date: 2/14/2019 5:28:00 PM
Hello Ceclia Macfarlane, oh.. wow! Could it be you are in love? have a nice evening my friend.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 2/20/2019 5:18:00 PM
Hi Darlene, I was smitten when I was 15 yrs old. Hugs

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