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Smitten

Upon meeting that special person There's no doubt in your searching mind You can sense it, this is surely the one It's a feeling like no other kind Suddenly you stutter and stammer Your face turns a crimson red Wonder if you remembered deodorant Or had two cups of coffee instead You hope and pray she doesn't notice The fumbling, the nervous twitch You try and try to act cool and together Not sure which hand is which You're right-handed, maybe left Your brain is in absolute befuddlement You wish her a very good day then wham Walk straight into an ill-placed plant You are not alone, it happens every day It's definitely a worldwide affliction If, as you think, she is actually the one You, my dear friend, are smitten

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Date: 3/23/2018 3:01:00 AM
Thats how I felt when I met my wife...17 years of marriage tomorrow....Fell in love 20 years ago... such a lucky lady dont ya think lol... I see youve been posting whilst I was asleep. We need to have words lol
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/23/2018 5:46:00 AM
Happy 17th to you and your wifey-poo!!!! YEE HAW! Already explained the snoring thingy... weren't you listening? THERE... my words!

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