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Smiling Love

In sweet tenderness sweeping inside echoes moans turn tides the sun warmly whispers joy your a pleasant delight touching softly amber with your finger rays runs deep Wind caressing the brow speaks within gentle love chains pearl drops fall looking into distant clouds heart murmurs beat faster skipping silver to white puffy grey smoking sighs surrender sweetly Magic smiling gently in the blue Heaven's a golden signal beams larks singing merrily an enchanting tune holds captivating the air in a circle of light honey, it's softly held on the warm glow upon your face (Unrhymed Tercet)

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Date: 9/11/2017 5:59:00 PM
Hi Liam , beautiful romantic write , you sure do have a lot of writes , ps would make a wonderful poetry book from your collection here , you are highly skilled ::)))
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/11/2017 6:18:00 PM
niall i have a few published thank you so kindly i pray your week is blessed beautiful what i have posted here is only a fraction of what i have written
Date: 9/20/2015 2:14:00 PM
Liam Mate, Romantic here,of course, with quite exquisite and magnificence imagery. "Circle of Light Honey" -- perfect!! I agree with Nette about the "Mr. Romance" title. Outstanding my friend!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 9/20/2015 2:09:00 PM
- So romantic .... a adorable poem, Liam - Hope your weekend has been fine :) - Hugs and smile :) // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/19/2015 4:39:00 AM
effervescent in its tone and mood, mr. romance!.. huggs
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Date: 9/18/2015 6:19:00 PM
Hi Liam!Another very beautiful,romantic, magical,sweet, n' captivating love poem, you've penned here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling! So very beautifully written!Just awesome!Another very sparkling diamond from your very golden pen.I truly enjoy it!A most beautiful,romantic, dreamy,sweet enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.I love it!A true glowing golden gem!Just wonderful!Excellent!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++! A Fav! To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic,gentle and sweet.I'm so very happy to see you writing and posting again Liam.I really hope and pray with all my heart n' soul that you're okay in everything.Keep your Faith!Wishing you a very peaceful and lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 9/18/2015 6:12:00 PM
aww... sweeeeet....
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