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Smile Effect

I could have commented on your sexy body How you looked in high heel shoes They way you look when you walk away Like your knowing what you do I could have complimented you on that hot red dress The way it flowed gracefully over those great hips And how Im amazed whenever you talk to me How Im distracted by those ruby lips Yes all these things attracted me to you Im enthralled by your moves and classy style. But there was a moment when my heart melted Yes it melted when I saw your smile

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/31/2016 10:38:00 PM
Thank you Carl......my best asset yet!
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Date: 1/30/2016 11:57:00 PM
Hi, Carl. stopping to leave a SMILE. :)
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Date: 1/29/2016 11:48:00 AM
Carl, some smiles are unforgettable. You could have, complimented this and that. But, it was life that captured you by surprise. A lovely write. Different, but lovely. I hope you post another poem. I'm in the mood of reading new writes from you dear friend... Hugs. LINDA
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Carl Fraser
Date: 1/29/2016 10:25:00 PM
Alas it is a fictional write my friend. But I do seem to melt from a smile. Thanks for reading Linda

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