Smile

If you have suffered many things Just remember when you where small, Swinging on swings Playing with balls. Then a smile suddenly appears Don't cry! No more tears! Just smile, for a while...

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/24/2016 9:24:00 AM

This is a very wise piece of advice, Elena! Sometimes, we tend to forget to look back on our childhood and remember the fun yet simple stuff that makes us smile-- thanks so much for the smiley reminder! :) I'm glad that Charma told me about you-- keep on writing and developing your talent :) I believe you can continue to write wonderful poems as you grow older! Hone this beautiful talent of yours!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2016 9:16:00 AM

this is so sweet, Elena. I heard you were new here. A big welcome to Poetry Soup!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/23/2016 12:24:00 PM

Hi sweet Elena , I was taking a break from poetrysoup site, but I had to log in and leave you a comment : ). You put a smile on my face, just seeing you here made my day.What a lovely poem. Adding it to my favourites. Brava hafna : ) .

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/23/2016 12:16:00 PM

You just made me smile, lovely poem!

Tim Smith

Date: 5/23/2016 3:18:00 AM

Keep the smiles and the poems coming Elena

Skat A

Date: 5/22/2016 3:50:00 PM

Elena, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Brenda Mcgrath

Date: 5/22/2016 12:07:00 PM

Your poem brought a smile to me. Good job!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/22/2016 7:40:00 AM

SoSo, cute...Elena, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"