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Alone you walk? Is that what you claim? Maybe it's you who's left it this way? I've seen pen to paper write the deepest of thoughts and the darkest of secrets It's been too long since our hearts did beat a bliss filled sense of numbness yet we find it only in ignorance I'll walk alone, yes all alone but only to see you walk hand in hand in another's embrace So allow me to take your lonely path and I'll smile as I give you away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/5/2012 1:59:00 PM
nicely written,Hanna
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Date: 6/5/2012 1:24:00 PM
Touching poem, but very well written Hannah - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/5/2012 1:10:00 PM
Wow..this is deeply said and so intense..yet heartfelt at the same time..excellent write here Blake..btw I was laughing so hard at your comment on Diane's page..couldn't stop...enjoyed..Love your work!
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Blake Hannah
Date: 6/5/2012 1:13:00 PM
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoy Also, I'm happy you found my comment funny I suppose? 0.o
Date: 6/5/2012 1:08:00 PM
hi thanks for your comments on my poem, and its ok you dont have to give feed back if you dont like biblical poems i wills tillr ead your poems we are all difrent that is what makes each person unique. take care from diane
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Blake Hannah
Date: 6/5/2012 1:12:00 PM
You seem talented, just not exactly my cup of tea. So I wasn't sure what to say, but I felt if you were being kind enough to offer a review I should offer one as well ^^

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