Smile

Simple muscle movements; so everyone sayS Many hearts are brightened by their happy beaM I love to see one light the eyes; as the mouth says HI Listening to a child's laughter always makes mine swelL Everyone looks beautiful when they wear a smilE!

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/25/2009 4:32:00 AM

Excellent Smile Patricia. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today and along with it bringing us a Smile. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/24/2009 7:31:00 PM

Such an uplifiting "double" acrostic, Patricia. Not only meaningful, but cleverly constructed as well. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/24/2009 4:18:00 PM

Beginning to end..... a smile can say a lot!! Well done double acrostic!!!!!

James Knox

Date: 8/24/2009 3:13:00 PM

smiles are great .... good job :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/24/2009 2:53:00 PM

Interesting form taken to express your poem. Keep writing. Sara