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Blue ocean hands take away my senses vibrating in my chest wave crest high sea low my organs are spilling from my open mouth and I'm laughing

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Date: 11/7/2018 1:50:00 PM
Creative work ...Reads like a sea coaster ride. Sara
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Evelyn Collins
Date: 12/7/2018 12:42:00 PM
Thank you! I was going for the imagery
Date: 11/7/2018 1:48:00 PM
Very creative. I like the abstract feel of this.
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Evelyn Collins
Date: 12/7/2018 12:42:00 PM
Thank you! I really appreciate your feedback

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