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a rondel We rode by and caught The Thinker in France, one small window of time, recklessly close. The Vatican has many small windows when in Rome, we’d stood by, long in advance. Rows of windows, we'd waited for a glance of Pope Francis giving blessed repose. We rode by and caught The Thinker in France, one small window of time, recklessly close. Rodin’s famed sculpture exposed quite by chance, from the bus, our eyes fixed on his well-known pose. In Rome, so far-away, the pope? who knows? But in Paris no doubt, no looks askance, We rode by and caught The Thinker in France. posted December 13, 2015 This form is a rondel. As I was writing about an experience in Paris, I thought a French form would be appropriate. I like the occasion to use repeated lines for emphasis. My poem is a contrast between a serendipitous, chance sighting of the famous sculpture, The Thinker, in Paris and a well-planned but long wait to hear Pope Francis' Sunday blessing in Rome. Both Rodin's sculpture and the pope represent great thinkers in different ways.

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Date: 12/18/2015 10:23:00 PM
Wow great take with this lovely form Reason.. will hv to try this one for myself..Congrats on big win!
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Date: 12/20/2015 6:02:00 AM
it's great for the repetitive lines which you can use for emphasis. Thanks Dr. Upma.
Date: 12/18/2015 9:32:00 PM
Reason, Congratulations on your sweet win Luv **SKAT**
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Date: 12/18/2015 9:17:00 PM
reason, CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN.... LINDA
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Date: 12/18/2015 4:21:00 PM
rondel is an awesome form to showcase and I really like this simple topic you chose to illustrate the form. Merry Christmas, REason and congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/18/2015 2:21:00 PM
I have never tried this form before congrats on your win Reason:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/13/2015 3:55:00 PM
I liked the rondel form you used Linda and all the repeating lines
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