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In the marsh the cattails sway, Brave brown brushes standing tall. Feet firmly planted in their muddy bed.. Giving shelter there to big and small. Here the blackbird builds his nest, A flash of red his sudden gift. Amid the stalks the ducklings hide, In tender down they gently drift. Upon the bank the turtles bask, From hibernation at last set free. Like dinner plates of every size Free to rest and grow.. and be Here the otter plays among the reeds Playful creatures, swift and sleek Whiskers pointing east and west Quiet shelter is what they seek. On this earth a small habitat like this Must be a sacred protected place. For creatures that have no speaking voice.. We must stop the earth from loosing face.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/26/2009 7:12:00 AM
We are all losing these small treasures so quickly nowadays - but the children care ... Beautiful poem, Barbara! Thank you!
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Date: 7/23/2009 6:43:00 AM
What a beautiful caring poem you have written here. Thank you for sharing Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/21/2009 5:51:00 PM
Excellent write and a lesson for all ages. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 7/17/2009 7:48:00 PM
These wonderful creatures do have a "speaking voice" and it is yours, Barbara! I can't help but picture Thoreau standing behind you as you wrote this. Thank God, Walden Pond was saved from development a few years ago. But there are so many more places where nature's little ones thrive. This is a masterpiece, Barbara, one for my faves. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/17/2009 5:44:00 PM
Tremendous write Barbara, this poem should be in primary school classrooms, teach this at an early age>>James
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Date: 7/17/2009 7:47:00 AM
Nice reminder of how responsible we should be.....taking care of our planet and the wildlife that depend on us! Nice one Barbara!!!
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Date: 7/17/2009 4:43:00 AM
Love this Rhyme. It is well written and thought inspiring. Keep on writing. Sara
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Date: 7/17/2009 1:31:00 AM
Lets stop the earth of loosing face--great write and nice rhyme,very nice indeed-great--charma:)
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Date: 7/16/2009 8:47:00 PM
very good rhymes. check out some of my poems
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Date: 7/16/2009 8:08:00 PM
a rythmic, masterful, (oh ...... come on jim! just say it! dude!) ......this is the best rhyme I've seen in quite some time! BG!!! Jimmy,...and thanks for your sweet comments!
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