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Smackintheheartkerpow

There's just no word to describe true love One hasn't been invented till now So I'm going to create one all my own How about smackintheheartkerpow Now I think that sounds just about right That's where I just felt a big jolt Knocked me for a loop, back on me bum As strong as a lightening bolt Do I exaggerate well maybe a tad To your romantic prowess I bow There's really no doubt I've just been jabbed Smackintheheartkerpow © Jack Ellison 2013

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Date: 11/11/2013 10:13:00 AM
Mike went with me to a poetry meetup... He's helped me write some... so got to read a few himself... Think the guy over it was not amused by our silliness writting... And when one of his followers said she felt she'd been missing something after hearing ours... Well he looked agast... serious poetry was his thing... I think he wanted to give us a kerpow... LOL
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/11/2013 10:35:00 AM
In french they have a saying... "chaque un a son gout" (minus the accents)... each to his own taste! xoxoxox

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