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Slush

I'm never really in a rush To traipse through gushy, mushy slush Like that on any city street Where puddles form from melting sleet. The passing traffic sends up sprays Of wetness that's seen better days To splatter on your favorite coat (And splash avoidance seems remote). So in your boots just stride right through And do what all New Yorkers do, Which is to shrug or maybe kvetch 'Til we complete this slushy stretch.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/5/2015 6:39:00 PM
love how you got in the rhyme with Kvetch!! Cute poem, sweet Ilene! I guess I am lazier than you. I don't wish to stand up and take a shower! hahaha. I prefer to luxuriate.
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Date: 2/4/2015 5:05:00 AM
What a gem this is Ilene, you sure brought the images home to me. Luckily we still have Summer over here :) Hope your week is a brilliant one ;)
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Date: 2/3/2015 2:31:00 PM
Enjoyable read, thanks.
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Date: 2/3/2015 2:14:00 PM
Wonderful descriptive imagery Ilene - i do so love your rhymes:-) a 7 from me:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/3/2015 2:11:00 PM
- Bad behavior by the driver ...... a great poem Ilene ! - hug // Anne-Lise :)
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