Slumber

Snow Falling on Blue bells long gone Meadows upon land vast Aching for miles... Of superficial beings, Trees Vegetation Slow to even tide Winds Perfectly flawed crisp flake Down on, An object bound In open white. A fleck of peach Amidst placid weather Winter is forever ...Holding... Pieces of love In decay.. And as the creeps become Crawlies; come out to play. They each emerge from its mouth with only peace. The human remained in silence.

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Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 11/22/2014 4:55:00 AM

The theme waking up the souls in sleep.well done. Regards. -Safa

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/2/2014 5:54:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Luke - I choose your first very well written free verse - Great ! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)