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It started raining here on Thursday night..It has been raining, cloudy, foggy, damp, cool, and cold since..Four days now..Sara
Solid clouds enveloped early morn sky Lightning bolt flashed blindingly bright Seemed right in front of my eyes and did fly Scary thought that it could hit filled with fright Could not force myself inside to safety Had to take it all in_nitrogen air Thunder; but did not see that bolt unsafety Remain here when reason says go in to care There is something about a winter storm Same as summer but out of season now Will things be greener like spring thunderstorm Always refreshing to see how they grow Clouds moving at a very fast pace now Blue sky appearing in the west drip drop slow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/25/2012 2:10:00 AM
Will things be greener like spring thunderstorm... simply fantastic! somehow a romantic feeling emerge from this poem
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Date: 1/24/2012 6:53:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments on my writings Sara. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/23/2012 2:15:00 PM
My, that weather sure gave you inspiration, my friend. I love these pieces
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Date: 1/23/2012 8:33:00 AM
Slow drip drop indicates the monsoon of life changes from time to time. Wonderful poem read and enjoyed,loved, bl
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Date: 1/22/2012 2:54:00 PM
can relate to this sara, enjoyed this. although scary
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Date: 1/22/2012 2:30:00 PM
I can be very frightened of the stronger thunderstorms. The lightning can be extremely dangerous, as you said, you might want to find safety! This is a fabulous sonnet Sara! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 1/22/2012 2:02:00 PM
Enjoyed my visit thank you Sara . Declan xx
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