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Slow Dancing Shadows

Secret kisses smile... shadows behind rice papered walls, slow deliberate steps shuffle upon tatami reed mats that rise and fall, steamy scents and moans are muffled as the midnight dance,knows no miles...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/7/2012 11:29:00 AM
When I click on one of your poems I know it will be truly exceptional Jay. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/8/2011 5:24:00 AM
Very nice Poety my friend...
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Date: 5/8/2011 5:23:00 AM
Sultry and succulent read Jay .. super intense imagery filled with the slow dancing shadows hiding kisses luv.. super write..
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Date: 5/8/2011 3:20:00 AM
Highly poetic and imaginative write. Nice one.
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