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Slowly slips fallen Tree down the waterfall ledge Chilled by cold wet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/9/2009 1:54:00 PM
Nice Haiku Sara >> James
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Date: 10/8/2009 10:00:00 AM
Okay, This one kinda confused me, I am not going to lie... I liked the second verse a lot and the poem had good flow... Doris' comment about thinking of the log?????HEhe..... Not trying to be perverted, it just threw off what I thought the poem meant.... Good write......:JP]
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Date: 10/8/2009 6:50:00 AM
I put a rate.
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Date: 10/8/2009 6:50:00 AM
good one, different view point, I thought about the log but didn't go there.
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