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Slipping Away

When I think of death I think what a tragedy But whenI look at that persons life I say it's beautiful How does that affect you and me? When we're tied in a knot eternally For better or worse they say It seems like each time I get close you slip away What is that about? I just wanna shout Give me a clue what to do and I'll make it up to you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/29/2010 11:45:00 AM
I am stopping in today to thank you for all your wonderful comments Samantha. May your weekend be one of much joy to you and may it bring inspiration to the end of your pen. Love, Carol
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Book: Shattered Sighs