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'slip Back Into Me'

a million thoughts in my head none of them constructive or so it seems even though it keeps me awake peace needs to find me again, just in case my coordinates are flawed just in case my compass lost direction I need to embrace my space slip back into me not some watered down version of what people need me to be ©103010012012

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Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 7/29/2013 7:46:00 AM

:) love this one!!!

Painted Hunter

Date: 2/21/2013 12:12:00 PM

Good writing here!

Jack Jordan

Date: 2/9/2013 4:14:00 PM

Very nice! Jack

Annie Lander

Date: 1/21/2013 10:16:00 AM

even though it keeps me awake a millions thought in my head love the feel of this

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/20/2013 9:15:00 AM

love the avatar btw ;)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/20/2013 9:14:00 AM

I think I need to take note of this, Missy-- I love that line, embracing your space-- can I kidnap it? I mean if ever there comes a time that i do actually write something. Sigh. Thanks for passing by my poem-- I wish you a year filled with God's grace as well! mwahugs!

Jack Horne

Date: 1/13/2013 2:50:00 PM

just love this, Wilma. Hope 2013 is great for you too, my friend lfde

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/11/2013 10:07:00 PM

I felt so good reading this Wilma, now I know I am not the only one wandering around wondering what life is all about. Everytime I feel I might know, the knowledge eludes me. How are you sweetie, Hope your new year is off to a great start! :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/11/2013 3:56:00 PM

another wonderful poem from you wilma,, just in case i have not,,, happy new year....

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/10/2013 7:06:00 PM

Oh I can sooo relate to this. When the mind races .. peace seems to run. May peace finds its way back into your soul. Love and light !!

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/10/2013 10:59:00 AM

A masterful write that you have written my friend, what a powerful piece! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and amazing poem this afternoon! Quite the wondrous piece Wilma, I loved it immensely! Great Work!!

David Williams

Date: 1/10/2013 4:18:00 AM

Wilma, Wilma, Wilma woohoo baby your compass has not lost direction it has brought a smile to my face again....David

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/10/2013 3:36:00 AM

A golden gem, Wilma - It's just gorgeous! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)