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Slim Pickings

A waning moon hangs under an obsidian sky as I walk through a the dark scrub forest past stumps of giants felled long ago. The river‘s low few salmon in the pools and none flounder on the gravel banks. Eagles and ravens are not to be seen though the signs say bears have been sighted. Once this river sustained an autumn feast but now pickings are pretty slim.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/4/2015 9:21:00 PM
Vivid imagery and splendid phrasing! The detail you bring to your river surroundings is exceptional. Well done my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 12/8/2015 9:26:00 AM
Thanks Keith

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