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Slim Gummy Jim

Slim Jim likes to swim he also likes the gym His weakness for sugarcane driving him insane He chewed on every sweet ever made Looking for his sugar rush he forgot to brush His teeth where so bad lots of pain he had The dentist pulled them all away Poor slim gummy Jim payed for his sin After a while he had a new smile Sugarcane never tasted the same

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Silent One

Date: 3/1/2018 7:20:00 AM

Poor gym, I feel his pain..

Niall Fulham
Date: 3/1/2018 3:07:00 PM

Hi Silent One , thanks for comment ,,, lol sweet tooth now no tooth ::))

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/1/2018 4:23:00 AM

- Poor Jim :))) - Fun and lovely written, Niall - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 3/1/2018 5:15:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise , lol ,, Ireland is snowed in and it is to get worse later today but I don't mind because I am looking out the window nice and snug lol;;;;;;)))))))) hugs

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/28/2018 11:17:00 PM

Very cute, Niall. Well done. Beautiful flow.

Niall Fulham
Date: 3/1/2018 1:29:00 AM

Hi Line , thanks for comment my friend ::)) hugs