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Slick Limerick

Susan Burch came bubble-wrapped
Not ready, but waiting, to be sent back
A reject toy
Till she met a boy
Who unwrapped her with happy claps


Received 2nd place in "Slick Limerick" contest

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  1. Date: 2/28/2013 6:37:00 PM
    Congrats, Susan. Well done. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 7:44:00 AM
    Congratulations on you win. A clever limerick. Your ABC contest is defiantally a challenge, harder than I thought. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 4:54:00 AM
    i like this! congrats on your win...

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 8:52:00 PM
    Susan.. CONGRATULATIONS, with this awesome poem about YOU :-) LINDA

  1. Date: 9/30/2011 1:42:00 PM
    This is truly an awesome limerick, Susan. Love the originality as well as the humor. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/30/2011 9:58:00 AM
    Congrats on your win, Sue. Nice going. xxxRalph

  1. Date: 9/29/2011 6:10:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D., Susan

  1. Date: 9/29/2011 12:52:00 AM
    way to go, susan, you got a great win out of your cute limerick here. Congrats to you, my friend!!

  1. Date: 9/28/2011 5:56:00 PM
    Cute, Susan. Congrats on your 2nd place win. Kim

  1. Date: 9/28/2011 2:58:00 PM
    Susan-Top notch win, girl! I like the powerful line, NOT READY BUT WAITING! A great way to describe your underdevelopment! ........applause.....applause! High five, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/28/2011 11:56:00 AM

  1. Date: 9/28/2011 10:50:00 AM
    Really like this. Congratulations Susan

  1. Date: 9/28/2011 10:32:00 AM
    Congrats Susan on second place win with this cleverly penned entry luv.. always a joy ..luv..

  1. Date: 9/28/2011 10:19:00 AM
    Congratulations Susan, on your "Slick Limerick" contest win sponsored by P.D. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/28/2011 7:54:00 AM
    In bubble-wrap?? Clever one Susan, good luck for the contest :) Wilma

  1. Date: 9/26/2011 6:37:00 PM
    Cute one..Great idea..Reads like winning material to me..Good luck in the contest..Reads like you understand and are a winner in life..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 9/23/2011 2:50:00 PM
    Happy weekend I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/23/2011 12:20:00 AM
    This is superb and a telling tale of your beginnings, right? Does this mean you were a premie?....How nice! Best of luck in this contest, Susan. ...Just wanted to say thanks for true feedback on some of my recent work. It is appreciated when someone really reads for depth. I know u understand. Blessings, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/22/2011 9:44:00 PM
    well, I think this is pretty keen, Susan. I can just see him there clapping his hands with anticipations. heehee. Did you have a bow on top? I hope your limerick does super great!