Slick

His rhythmic progress and sideways prance, With flowing mane his movements dance…

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/20/2011 10:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "What You Will"contest Tirzah. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2011 8:45:00 PM

as I recall you are the one who loves horses, right? This is so nicely showing one of them. how are you doing, Tirzah?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/11/2011 1:10:00 PM

Congrats Tirzah on your fabulous win in Brian's contest .. fantastic write ..knew it first time read.. so honored to be sharing this winners list with u my friend..luv..

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/11/2011 12:55:00 PM

aahhh yes the beauty of dressage is a grace to behold on these well trained, beautiful intelligent creatures, Tirzah. You've described it so well in just 2 lines. Congratulations to you!

Elaine George

Date: 5/11/2011 11:59:00 AM

Sounds like a beautiful stallion. Many congrats on your WIN, Tirzah. Lainie

Kash Poet

Date: 5/11/2011 11:06:00 AM

Wonderful write.Congrats Tirzah on your 5th place win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/6/2011 4:20:00 PM

Oh to be as lovely as the movement of the horse.. this is wonderful Tirzah and glad to see u here tonight... Kentucky Derby tomorrow luv.. the most beautiful horses on the planet race ... good luck if this is for Brian's contest my friend..happy weekend..

Kash Poet

Date: 5/6/2011 12:24:00 PM

wonderful!

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 5/6/2011 9:27:00 AM

* Yesss * this lovely image causes myself to consider what shall occur tomorrow amid * the winners circle at Churchill Downs after * “The Run for The Roses” * when the victor shall prance that dance of knowing * that they defeated all their pony peers for millions to behold within * “The Kentucky Derby” * So don't forget to bet upon numbers * “7 or 13 or A Combination of The Two” * very lovely poem in pretty and sweet * hugs and kisses * kisses and hugs * sarah

Mike Dailey

Date: 5/6/2011 8:50:00 AM

Nice