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Sleeves of the Soul

our hearts were once joined, now apart the degrees of separation are burning, my wounds are weeping there is no other day judgment came yesterday Autumn leaves began their journey as my night was laid to rest the walls started falling down scattering the Rose of Sharon a bed of flowers to die in a place to lay my weary head I can no longer go walkabout black smoke is streaming a signal, all is not well there is only one reality, now tomorrow has yet to come yesterday is already history I must savor these last moments, sucking in each drop in desperation I prayed for hope for the will to fight again but also for the strength to let go my fingers slowly lost their grip creeping my purchase crumbled sinking ever deeper becoming an automaton I am going through the motions watching the lights extinguish along with my last grain of sanity the cloudy waters of my heart dream poems, writing of the light I can surf the stars once again the lip curls, it is folding my heart and creasing my mind sanity has fled on golden wings as sleeves of soul sway in the breeze

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/13/2013 9:01:00 PM
Enjoyed. What a wonderful write. Thanks for giving me a little your time to read my work too.
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 4/14/2013 4:55:00 AM
Thanks Anthony it was my pleasure reading your work, I cant thank you enough love Jayne
Date: 4/13/2013 2:04:00 PM
Jayne, your poem is amazing, an excellent write all the way! Much Love and respect ~*~ SKAT
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 4/14/2013 4:53:00 AM
Hi Skat I am very happy you enjoyed my poem thanks for the visit and the wonderful comment love Jayne
Date: 4/12/2013 10:11:00 PM
Jayne, this is awesome . Enjoyed stopping by this evening. Thank you for sharing, ~Always & Forever *LINDA
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 4/13/2013 4:35:00 AM
Hi Linda Very glad you enjoyed my poem thanks for stopping by :) love Jayne x
Date: 4/12/2013 11:51:00 AM
Your tender style softens the harshness in life. I was not disappointed in the ending. It made my arms want to fill the shirtsleeves of your soul....... Hugs..... Jake
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 4/13/2013 4:33:00 AM
Hi Jake I am touched by your comment and I am very happy you liked it hugs Jayne x
Date: 4/12/2013 5:58:00 AM
Just faved this poem and faved you too..So very glad to have been introduced to you and your poetry - Tim
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 4/13/2013 4:30:00 AM
Thank you so much, I am very happy you enjoy my poetry its a great compliment love Jayne x
Date: 4/12/2013 4:27:00 AM
This is absolutely elegant and stunning poetry, Jayne...'my wounds are weeping'...Wow - Tim
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 4/12/2013 5:07:00 AM
Thank you so much for a wonderful comment its very much appreciated love and hugs JC

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