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Sleepy Dreams

Sleepy Dreams Imagination roams beyond the dark. When dreamy nights pass wistfully sublime. And wings of heavens fly unto life’s shore. Where sleepy thoughts to memories do climb. Revising ill felt days with fantasy. Reviewing deepest joys within life’s core. Where sleepy thoughts to memories do climb. And wings of heavens fly unto life’s shore. Before night folds and yields itself to dawn. Forgotten dreams remember stolen time. And wings of heavens fly unto life’s shore. Where sleepy thoughts to memories do climb. The daylight too soon chases night away. And puff! Reality is somehow famed by lore. Where sleepy thoughts to memories do climb. And wings of heavens fly unto life’s shore. © © Dane Smith-Johnsen March 17, 2010 Poetic form: Reverse refrain

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Date: 3/18/2010 3:36:00 PM
Thank you for your comments on my poem. I have read a few of yours now....I like them. I will continue reading
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Date: 3/17/2010 5:35:00 PM
Nostalgia brings back only the good. I liked this. Vince
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Date: 3/17/2010 3:43:00 PM
Andrea, It must be a computer glitch'. I've had that happen before, too. I don't know what causes that. I wish I did. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/17/2010 1:32:00 PM
dane Anne, I just responded to this one and now I don't see my comment here. What happened!!! I love this one. Andrea ps and I realized that you and everyone else was getting confusing so I put a note at the top of that limerick!
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Date: 3/17/2010 12:38:00 PM
enjoyed reading today, hpe you have success in the contest.
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Date: 3/17/2010 12:34:00 PM
Fantasy is a great way to forget the mundane troubles of day-to-day life, Dane Ann. I like the "dreamy" way you approach this subject and the imagery is awesome! Well done, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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