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Sleepwalk

As the twinkling stars clung to the ceiling of earth they glittered as darkness gave way to new birth Fireflies flickered and danced through the trees as the rippling brook made its journey with ease; tripping and bubbling o'er stones on its way anxious for oceans too eager to stay The blue mist arose and met up with the sky as the creatures stood silent to watch me walk by With heart in contentment my footsteps were light aimlessly wandering on through the night Where was I going and what lie ahead? My sleepwalking soon took me back to my bed... ...and resuming my slumber with memories so sweet the night in the forest made dreaming complete

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Date: 4/25/2017 9:52:00 AM
I just love the cadence of your rhyming poems. They flow so smoothly and always have a song like quality to them. You must have a melody in your mind as you write. I also loved the storyline and how you ended it. That was perfect. This was very well written Gayle.
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 4/25/2017 9:58:00 AM
Thanks! I do think one can trip over the words as a runaway rhythm can tend to do that! (I'm gonna write one about that too! ;p )

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