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I just want to write you a happy song show you that I’m sincere love you, belong, I just want to write you a rhyming verse free you of lovers doubt that is your curse. Where do you go to there within your head? when you should be sleeping in your warm bed, wrapped up in sweet dreams ever so fragrant yet you wander the nights like a vagrant. Why do you go to this world so shady? the night so dark not fit for a lady, your eyes open only to the moonlight in this place where you go every midnight. Oh we need to relive our gangnam style come down to earth and dance a little while, every single step a journey by chance into your pretty eyes I need to glance. Yes I need to write you a happy song put to right all this evil that is wrong, find out where you go when you are alone to free your nomadic mind your cyclone. Then a need to write you a rhyming verse put to right this affliction that’s getting worse, every night amongst the scented jarrow sleepwalking the streets ever so narrow. © Harry J Horsman 2012

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Date: 8/1/2018 7:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed reading this. So well-written, heartfelt offering. I really like it.
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Date: 7/31/2018 6:09:00 PM
Very nicely penned Harry..the 2nd stanza is my favorite...Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/31/2018 9:45:00 AM
Well done Harry enjoyed every word, congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 10/30/2012 6:16:00 AM
THE FLOW OF THIS WRITE WAS JUST BREATH TAKING, THE CHOICE OF WORDS EXCELLENT. AND MOST IMPORTANTLY THE STORY BEHIND THE WRITE IS JUST WONDERFUL. I REALLY ENJOYED YOUR WRITE HARRY *SMILES* RON
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Date: 10/29/2012 1:27:00 AM
smoothie harry... there are parts here that make me sing the melody of sleepwalk!... winning huggs!..:)
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Date: 10/28/2012 9:18:00 AM
Last stanza my fave! Jimbo
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Date: 10/28/2012 7:07:00 AM
OUTSTANDING LYRICS TO SLEEPWALK MELODY HARRY LUV .. A DYNAMITE VERSION FOR LOVERS EVERYWHERE LUV .. MUCH SUCCESS IN CONTEST ..
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Date: 10/27/2012 7:01:00 PM
Good one! YOU taught me anew word GANGNAM! Light & Love
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Date: 10/27/2012 5:56:00 PM
O, dear Harry, didn't you know that sleepwalking is her best way to show you that she really cares? Excellent write! :) Hanitra
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Date: 10/27/2012 5:00:00 PM
This is good Harry. Is it for a contest? I'm glad that i don't sleepwalk, at least not that I know. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 10/27/2012 3:47:00 PM
Thanks Harry .... this is truly a special poem!! Wishing you a good weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/27/2012 2:17:00 PM
Sweet sleepwalk enjoyed. A great picture adorned. Loved always, bl
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Date: 10/27/2012 2:08:00 PM
Classic piece my friend. Your work is inspiring. I'm glad I came across this one today. Well done!! Michael
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Date: 10/27/2012 1:09:00 AM
What a marvelous poem! Enjoyed reading it. With warmest wishes and good luck in the contest, Larisa
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Date: 10/27/2012 12:53:00 AM
alright, harry.. this dreamy piece makes me sing and dance... great pacing of thoughts!.. winning huggs!..:)
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Date: 10/26/2012 8:23:00 PM
Hola, Harry.... write me a happy song,,, my walking ends up near a wall... wink... No, i'm kidding~ I have no evil walks... good luck in the contest, thank you for sharing your wonderful poem, Good night*PD
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Date: 10/26/2012 11:17:00 AM
You sound like a wonderful white knight set to rescue a lovely maiden in this sweet poem, Harry. A woman who is sleepwalking through her life. Very romantic!
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Date: 10/26/2012 10:43:00 AM
You have moved me, what an amazing piece of your spirit. Thanks for sharing, you are a very talented communicator.
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Date: 10/26/2012 8:49:00 AM
wow what a romantic rhyme harry, everybody loves a happy tune and this is on , it would be a lucky girl that receives something like this xx
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Date: 10/26/2012 9:05:00 AM
I see you have posted it as sad but i don't agree with you there dear boy xx

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