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Sleeptalking

There’s a quiet in watching myself sleep Like a buzz , a drone of calm abandon Gently passing this fluid ocean , deep Past reeds and tall grasses that slither on To unknown whispering or gushing tide-- A current, steady as unconscious sigh Rivering through the swooshes of my glide, To bring rest from a wired day..I slip by. Across glittering shorelines in moon’s flow; My breaths bid me closer in an embrace While I lie here in your summer, aglow As whispers talk in lapses about grace. Till after midnight, we both cuddle peace For the drawl of evening pulls me, astir Where in your arms- soft murmurs-- find release Through a space between awareness and blur. Talking In Your Sleep Contest 1/20/2017 Sponsor: Lewis Raynes

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Date: 10/3/2020 9:48:00 AM
Very dream like with wonderful choice of words. A joy to read.
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Date: 1/21/2017 9:33:00 PM
this is SO beautiful, Nette. Truly a wonder!!! SEVEN
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Date: 1/20/2017 2:50:00 PM
Ah now thats so sweet!!! Beautiful poem!
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Date: 1/19/2017 11:30:00 PM
Such a pretty poem about sleep! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/19/2017 8:47:00 PM
A breathtaking take on the prompt. I love it - was especially fond of the 2nd line, "...a drone of calm abandon" - awesome.
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Date: 1/19/2017 7:06:00 PM
nette my first thought is the peaceful sound from shorelines can bring a restful closing to the eyes...good luck in the contest
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Date: 1/19/2017 1:30:00 PM
Very lovely nette
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Date: 1/19/2017 1:00:00 PM
- Sounds peaceful and lovely ... sweet dreams, Nette - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/19/2017 12:22:00 PM
My gosh, this is an enchanting poem which leaves me breathless line for line!Makes me want to sleep so well today.
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Date: 1/19/2017 10:51:00 AM
Must have had a little wine before bedtime Nette, reads like a winner, best wishes...
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Date: 1/19/2017 10:45:00 AM
There is always a mesmerizing beauty in your poetry Nette. The way you see things is so wonderful. each and every line flows smoothly as the entire poem has its own melody. Really nice my friend.
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