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Sleeping Beauty

Naked woman of my dreams sleeping in my bed I'm so thankful she's my wife It's attempt at this form.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/19/2013 12:24:00 PM
I love to see fellow poets trying their hand at the daintier poetry forms... many think because haiku and senryu are so short that they don't carry much weight, but I disagree. I believe practicing them will actually make you be able to do more with your words... being how you're so limited it forces you to create an impact. Keep it up, my friend!
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Date: 5/19/2013 9:25:00 AM
very nice! i like this so much...
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Date: 5/19/2013 7:44:00 AM
How sweet! :) What an awesome write!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/19/2013 7:59:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 5/19/2013 7:28:00 AM
A terrific attempt and a fantastic piece here. I'm sure your wife would be happy to read something like this. :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/19/2013 8:00:00 AM
Any advice for a newbie Drake? Thanks for commenting.

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