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Sleep Walking

I got out of bed I wore my fuzzy gown Because I sleep naked Walked to the door Opened the door for them Groaned at them I shuffled back to my room Closed my bedroom door Removed my gown Got back in bed And continued...

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Date: 3/18/2015 12:30:00 AM
Somnambulism - or sleep walking for everyone's understanding, is what your poem is about. I like the way you paint a scenario and then leave the reader to complete the image and intentions of the persona...a 7!
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Date: 3/18/2015 7:40:00 PM
Wow thank you Hannington for your words and a 7! Be blessed.

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