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Sleep On My Mind

S - Sleep - the time for siesta - L - lots of folks lie down at midday. E - Extreme heat requires naps after E - earth's equatorial high noon. P - People in restful pursuit. O - Of course, children have time-out N - needing at least forty winks. M - Meditating artists doze while Y - Yoga practitioners slumber. M - Motion ceases when the banker nods I - in the lightest of reveries. Meantime N - nudging my lethargic side, I D - drop all labor and stop to snore. ~~~~~Check the last words in each line for a poem within the poem.~~~~~ "Siesta - midday after noon pursuit. Time-out winks while slumber nods. Meantime, I snore." May 12, 2014

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Date: 5/23/2014 9:33:00 PM
Reason,, enjoyed the win...Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/23/2014 3:00:00 PM
Great sleepy tune..Way to go with this winner..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/19/2014 5:32:00 PM
I really enjoyed this poem. I read it like three times!! Thank you for entering my contest, I hope to see you in my future challenges!!:JP)
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Date: 5/19/2014 7:16:00 PM
Thanks, Jared, I welcome the read(s) and the comment as well as the placement.
Date: 5/19/2014 7:30:00 AM
Congrats on your win Reason!
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Date: 5/18/2014 8:43:00 AM
Stopping back with congratulations on your win
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Date: 5/18/2014 7:51:00 PM
Thanks, Tim, for both your comments. Have a great nap.
Date: 5/18/2014 1:20:00 AM
Nice Reason to sleep... Congratulations Reason on this fine win in Jared contest. Verlena
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Date: 5/18/2014 7:52:00 PM
Thank you, Verlena, I enjoyed yours too. Congratulations on the top placement.
Date: 5/17/2014 7:59:00 PM
You must live in a much hotter clime than I. We are welcoming some sunshine. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/17/2014 12:49:00 PM
I enjoyed your wining piece, congrats
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Date: 5/17/2014 8:55:00 AM
Wonderful write Reason ! Had to be a winner n it is ! Congrats on huge win !
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Date: 5/16/2014 9:23:00 PM
Wow, I will bet this comes in at the top spot Reason. It is perfect!
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Date: 5/18/2014 7:53:00 PM
thanks, Connie, for the pre-win comment. Don't get many of those here at PS. They are special and I welcome your remarks.
Date: 5/13/2014 9:43:00 AM
What a wonderful end line acrostic...I too am thinking of sleep...lol
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