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Sleep Footles

Can’t sleep Counts sheep Shuts eyes And thighs (LOL) Him snore Won’t score So tired Inspired Gets up Tea cup Tablet? Not yet Lies down Big frown Needs loo Have to Get up Use butt Bed time Divine I snore Once more Jan Allison 29th August 2014

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2014 5:11:00 PM

hahaha, this is one of my favorites of all the story footles I have seen. GREAT job with this set, Jan. use butt was sure interesting!!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/30/2014 5:18:00 PM

LOL Andrea I do have so much fun with these!Get up use butt was better than need poo use loo! :-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 8/29/2014 8:03:00 PM

the footle queen does it again. Great one Jan, loved it.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/30/2014 4:55:00 AM

Always a pleasure to hear from you Maurice:-) Hugs Jan xx

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 8/29/2014 7:48:00 PM

Lol, it's bed time. You'd better go to bed early and no score haha

Jan Allison
Date: 8/30/2014 4:54:00 AM

LOL Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/29/2014 7:01:00 PM

hahaaha and the queen strikes again :) fun fun ;)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2014 7:08:00 PM

LOL I have handed Tim back to you so it is now just my naughtiness showing through I guess Casarah - he is i amazing to write with we had great fun. Hugs Jan xxx

David Brown

Date: 8/29/2014 3:41:00 PM

Sweet and funny, thanks for making me smile :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2014 3:42:00 PM

My pleasure David thank you for taking the time to comment:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 8/29/2014 3:33:00 PM

Another Footle Gem Jan, nice one - James...

Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2014 3:37:00 PM

James if you have time do check out 'and then I kissed him' written with Tim Smith - my favourite footles I've helped write:-) :-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2014 3:11:00 PM

Just can't get fixed in that bed..Way to Footle..Thanks for the visit..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2014 3:14:00 PM

Thanks Sara for the lovely comment as ever:-) hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/29/2014 2:12:00 PM

Dear Jan, This form is contagious and you do it so well! In just a few words you've told an entire story. Excellent, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2014 2:15:00 PM

I do try and write other forms but for a bit of fun this is great:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/29/2014 12:49:00 PM

He's out....no doubt......I weep....no sleep......good night...sleep tight......fantastic Jan.....hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2014 2:14:00 PM

the shuts eyes and thighs made me giggle:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith
Date: 8/29/2014 1:31:00 PM

Me too...lol...hence falling a sleep on the train...loved him snore....no score...lol

Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2014 1:25:00 PM

Hubby can realx and go to sleep at the drop of a hat wish I could:-) Hugs Jan xxx