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Contest Entry Whom did you dream of in your rare sleep? Twas not I wrapped in your arms for sleep. Fate, miles, and vows keep us apart When love returns and torments your sleep. Whom did you romp with this night last? Twas not I for my body does abhor sleep. Send your love to me on arrows swift At night my heart grieves to restore sleep To cover distance, fate and time Love returns, I beg more sleep. © GG 3/11/2013

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/10/2014 4:24:00 PM

Hi Mandy, .. I posted a new poem would you like to take a trip and read my poem..... You will find your name on my latest... hehehehHeheheh, WARNNING!!! It is a long poem... :) :) LINDA

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 11/17/2013 7:28:00 PM

Mandy, sleep is such wonderful inspiration, lovely ghazal!

Skat A

Date: 11/15/2013 10:45:00 AM

Mandy, Congratulations, on your 'Take the Leap' win............ LOVE ~ SKAT ~

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 11/14/2013 9:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Good job.

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/13/2013 11:33:00 AM

nicely penned....congrats on your win :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/12/2013 3:24:00 AM

Congratulations on the win, Mandy

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/8/2013 4:54:00 PM

You nailed in now hon XXXOO

Cherl Dunn

Date: 11/7/2013 5:55:00 PM

Thanks for the congrads on my crossing that bridge poem, and this as write of yours was wonderful and lovely Thank you golden girl for sharing.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2013 4:30:00 PM

ahhh, a sleep poem, after mine own heart!! Good one!

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 11/4/2013 12:10:00 PM

great write my friend Mandy ;) Good luck and have a nice sleep!! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/4/2013 5:51:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your creative lines this day..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/3/2013 6:21:00 PM

Okies Goldie you have the repeated word [sleep][it could be easier using -in sleep] correctly done now you have to get in the rhyming word BEFORE it, you use line 1 the word before SLEEP [the radeef] is RARE, rare is your word to rhyme with, so the word before Sleep in lines 1,2,4,6,8 MUST rhyme with RARE, that is called a [kaafiyaa]. You have time hon, Light & love

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/3/2013 2:50:00 PM

Good luck in Debbie's contest.

Jack Horne

Date: 11/3/2013 10:57:00 AM

lovely write, my friend - hope you're feeling much better now x

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/3/2013 9:42:00 AM

Wow, Mandy,, this sure moves me,, amazing poetry, you are so talented...