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Sleep

A pill that dissolves reality into dreams calm, with the needle of life, staring down at you no mirrors or reflections just the dreams of accomplishments the dreamlike stance closed eyes, with caressing thoughts no pain just calm no fears,mistakes, or reality biting just the closed eyes of dreams relaxed visions that awaken us

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/24/2010 2:59:00 PM
Very nice, fago. Congrats on your win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/24/2010 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations Fago on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Your Snooze, You Choose". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/24/2010 2:52:00 AM
This was the other write that involved a "pill" amongst the entries and I'm just really impressed with how you've described sleep in this one, it's so true--and your last line was the perfect way to end this--congrats on being in my winners' list, fago!! --nikko :)
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Date: 6/22/2010 5:01:00 AM
It is a pleasure to be reading your poetry this morning Fago. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with an overload of inspiration. Hoping you will challenge yourself to use all the inspiration which you may receive today. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/21/2010 11:03:00 AM
thank u
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Date: 6/21/2010 8:35:00 AM
soothing and calm write, enjoyed...P.D.
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