Sleep

Sighing, tossing, turning, Losing temper fast, Eyes so tired they're burning... Eventually (at last) Prolific snores will blast!

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Christina Bowring

Date: 10/19/2023 4:49:00 AM

A great Quintain Jack. Good choice of selected words. I can relate to this as so many can. The last line made me smile. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. :):)

Paul Callus

Date: 10/8/2023 12:50:00 AM

That is exactly how it's been this summer here in Malta when temperatures were making both days and nights unbearable. Now the autumn weather is much better...still warm, but in a comfortable way :) Regards, my friend // paul

Karen Croft

Date: 10/7/2023 12:02:00 AM

This is what I am going through, no prolific snores yet!

Karen Jones

Date: 9/23/2023 12:08:00 PM

Fun. Lol