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Slaves To Time

How many days are there, in our all consuming weeks Not enough, too many, perhaps we need a little tweak For people that slave hard, days don’t require a name There just continuities of time, without a rhyme or aim Earth just keeps spinning, and reality couldn’t care less Moon hangs on in there, apparently not out of interest Sun is a big magnet, holding our solar system together Milky Way spirals a black hole, without any given effort Life the only interested party, stands watching the clock Remainder of the universe, doesn’t bother taking stock God on the other hand, sees everything happen at once Satan can pop up anytime, conjuring his cunning stunts Ridiculous as this seems, our reality is the human mind All is relative to the observer, good, bad, average, kind Time’s definitely the driver, of linear inexorable wonder Without its fatal effect, we’re dead in perpetual slumber So how do we tweak our days, make them work in favor Stop bearing progeny into poverty, for fodder and labor My dog has it better, I’m disgusted to be brutally honest The absolute insanity, unfeasible populations among us This cycle must be broken, everyone deserving of a bite Why do you bear ten children, unable to afford them life Seven days a week, three hundred and sixty five, a year Scavenging for tomorrow, furthering their slavery career By David Kavanagh

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Date: 5/4/2021 12:10:00 PM
I just finished researching an illegitimate child who fathered ten children, but only one of them had a child, and that child died as a pauper child. As Adam Goodes said, "People do not need an handout, they need an hand up!" Well said! Aloha! Rico
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 5/5/2021 11:11:00 AM
Compare the USA budgets for education versus the military . . ...Aloha! Rico
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David Kavanagh
Date: 5/4/2021 1:44:00 PM
Heya Rico, I understand what your saying, and it’s probably true for a lot of these unfortunates, but the populations are still growing exponentially in certain countries, handouts will never sort it out, only education and population controls can prevent the inevitable death and suffering, and offer them a life worth living, cheers David
Date: 5/3/2021 5:59:00 PM
You have addressed some important issues. The answers are beyond my pay grade. Let's hope tomorrow is better than today. Have a great day.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 5/4/2021 1:59:00 AM
I also don’t have the answers David, other than the obvious, stop bearing children into poverty, exasperating the perpetual cycle of misery and child mortality, It’s up to their governments and religious leaders to try educate them to limit the amount of children per family, for the greater good of their countries, cheers David
Date: 5/3/2021 4:32:00 PM
Me , me , me David Why oh why bear multiple children if you cant afford them . Unless you can afford them all a similar amount or your love is limitless . And no child gets left behind or feels a longing sense of feeling somehow unworthy or unloved. Love this David Respect great work
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David Kavanagh
Date: 5/4/2021 1:50:00 AM
And that is the imponderable question why bring children into abject poverty other than to use them for child labor, ie slavery, and if you had any love for life, you would not let it happen, cheers David
Date: 5/3/2021 3:27:00 PM
Great poem, David, from the stars in the Milky Way to the family in the milk shop, the cycle of food we need for good health and nourishment, and the number of children we can truly feed, rather than 10 children starving to death while depending on the state or taxpayer money.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 5/3/2021 3:37:00 PM
It’s insane Lasaad, but even in third world countries, populations are huge and unsustainable, and yet they continue to bear huge families into a perpetual cycle of poverty and death, It’s not the children’s fault, it’s their parents and so called governments, cheers David

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