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Slash

Dreamy state of being My heart harmonizing, Harmonizing could of, should of, and would of.... My mind wonders, wonders of the why's The was I good enoughs? pretty enoughs? Hmm... Fantasizing till dawn Night fall, realizing My heart, my affection, been slashed Slash from deceitful passion, cloying nothings misguided temporary emotions my soul left in the cold longing for our spirits, to union as one left defeating war with my head and heart Only to realize my hoping and wishing been slashed....

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Ricky Muse

Date: 1/1/2019 2:40:00 PM

"Fantasizing 'til dawn" is so me.

Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 1/1/2019 5:57:00 PM

Thank you Richard Happy New Year

Phatt Matt

Date: 12/30/2017 10:25:00 PM

You have a beautiful writing here, I can tell it is from the heart. To me it flows like a jazzy vibe. You feel every vibe. Very sad but fun read~phatt

Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 1/1/2019 5:58:00 PM

Thank you love

Darren White

Date: 6/20/2017 6:30:00 AM

This is so beautifully written, yet so sad... But still. You can write! This is my favourite stanza: "My mind wonders, // wonders of the why's // The was I good enoughs? // pretty enoughs? // Hmm..."

Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 6/20/2017 9:58:00 AM

Thank you Darren I'm so glad you really enjoyed my poem... God bless you