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Slamming the Door

Your lines have been Xeroxed, even the other woman kept them in a box beneath the bed soiled with disease above the dog you liken with fleas Your lips swell with pretense like Botox Shame on you, poisoning Cupid's bow Your soul is tied to names you don't even know What's her name? To you, we're all named "doll" Barbie needs to bury Ken, get a bearer like Pall Your game is entertaining, but you still don't show Oh, big bad wolf! You can't blow down this house Finally, the cheese got up and chased off the mouse I've had enough of your shenanigans! I want a man, not a 10-lady-man-with-silky hands I thought you were a lover, but you're really a louse GOOD RIDDENS!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/9/2014 4:08:00 PM
Great Job!!!! I really enjoyed this slam:)
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Nikkia Roberts
Date: 5/9/2014 5:04:00 PM
Slamming the door, girl! :-) Love ya. Thanks!
Date: 5/9/2014 3:44:00 PM
Nikkia, you slam. You really know how to tell it like it is. You made high marks in my contest because you slam. Congratulations in placing second in my contest. Verlena
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Nikkia Roberts
Date: 5/9/2014 5:04:00 PM
Many thanks, Verlena. You're such a prolific writer. All the best. :)

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