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Slam Bam Clean Up the Oil Man

I'm going to break that pointer finger how long is this crap going to linger the lies, the death, the demise no hope for a plan revised we'll just throw your ass in the ringer Limerick/Slam

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/8/2012 10:54:00 PM

ha...love the limerick slam.... you know this is a good slam... especially the last line... always~ LINDA

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/13/2010 4:25:00 PM

Rick, congratulations on your win! It is so terrible what this spill has done to our environment. Aloha, Connie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/12/2010 10:40:00 AM

Congratulations ^Rick on your win in S K A T 's contest "Oil Spilled Out Anger ". Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/12/2010 8:21:00 AM

Congrats Rick on your HM in Irma's contest with this fantastic write and win today. ..enjoy your very special honor my friend.. and good luck in judging your own contest as well ..with luv..

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 7/18/2010 9:11:00 PM

Great Limerick for a touchy subject...and so poignant in its scope. I wish had the talent to do the slam as well. Good luck in the contest! Dan C

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/18/2010 1:36:00 PM

If any party deserves an attack, it's BP, Rick. Luckily, the cap on the well seems to be holding for now but the cleanup will take a long time. Excellent limerick, Rick! Best wishes in the contest. My limerick contest filled up in a couple hours. So sorry you missed it, but there's always next time. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/18/2010 1:18:00 PM

They have got a cap going now that has reduced the flow to 7500 barrels a day wihich is half of the flow...When will they stop the flow is the question? Great write to remind us that it is still going out there in the ocean..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/18/2010 1:13:00 PM

TOUCHE' Rick.. great entry to Irma's new challenge.. really perfect lines my friend.. good luck and thankxxx for your uplifting comments on my entry too.. never wrote a Slam and in two days wrote two.. maybe a new career for the "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup?? with luv..

Amy Green

Date: 7/18/2010 12:53:00 PM

WOOOHOOOO! Tell 'em, Rick!