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Skylark

The heavens, their stage;
spotlights of sunrays.
Soaring angelic chorus.
Ballerina dance,
their movements enhanced
by beautiful songs of love.
A sweet lullaby
drifts down from the sky.
Performance demands a hush.
Entranced, we are now,
as they take their bow.
Mother Earth's mobile for us.
Contest: The Alouette Sponsor Dr. Ram Mehta

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/23/2014 1:17:00 PM
this one was quite good. I am surprised it is not in top ten. Congrats, dear. (oh, i see he knocked off points for syllable count. I did not even notice. It read very nice)
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Date: 8/22/2014 10:35:00 PM
lovely write Arlene and congrats for the win. Mohan
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Date: 8/22/2014 6:28:00 AM
Thanks for the entry and my congrats on your win in my contest, Arlene. You would have been placed high but of the syllable count.
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Date: 7/15/2014 1:35:00 PM
Great imagery Arlene! Always~~Keith :-)
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/15/2014 3:57:00 PM
Nice to see your comment, Keith.. Imagery is something I struggle with.. Hugs my friend.. Arlene
Date: 7/15/2014 1:33:00 PM
A great poem should inspire and your`s inspires me.
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Date: 7/15/2014 3:54:00 PM
So nice of you to say, dear Ryan!.. Thanks so much!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/15/2014 1:21:00 PM
Yes, Free Indeed Their Melody ~ Very Beautiful Baby Girl....KLove *
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Date: 7/15/2014 3:53:00 PM
Thanks so much, dear Jeremy! Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/15/2014 1:19:00 PM
Very nice, Arlene. Mother earth's mobile for us. I do like that. I liked the melody of this one and the rhymes flew like the wings of the Skylark. Truly enjoyed it.... Robert.
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/15/2014 3:52:00 PM
Wow! That is so sweet of you to say, Robert my friend! Thank you so much.. Hugs.. Arlene

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